*The Limerick Book*

Love is in the air

by Eddie Sullivan on 2008-04-07 17:36:05

I once knew a charming young miss.
I leaned in to give her a kiss,
But I fell to my knees,
For her breath smelled of cheese.
Limburger, provolone, even swiss!

Review by Chris at 2008-04-07 17:42:26

Yikes!

How well does it fit the category? 8.0

Score: 8.0

Review by John Sullivan at 2008-04-08 08:51:00

Now that is a limerick!!

How well does it fit the category? 8.0

Score: 8.0

Reply by Eddie Sullivan at 2008-04-08 13:59:49

The title fits perfectly, too.

Review by Christine Perfetti at 2008-04-08 17:11:07

Nice! I'm not sure I like this charming young miss.

How well does it fit the category? 10.0

Score: 8.0

Reply by Eddie Sullivan at 2008-04-08 17:16:51

Me neither! What a cheese-breath!

Review by Gary Olds at 2008-08-30 20:34:52

The simple ones are the best. And agree with another reviewer - nice title!

How well does it fit the category? 8.0

Score: 6.0