by John Sullivan on 2008-05-07 13:40:27
There once was a man from Nantucket who shot his ball in a bucket two points said he then he said with glee "they gave me the shot, so I stuck it"
- Score: 7.33
Review by Eddie Sullivan at 2008-05-07 13:57:23
Plus 1 for throwing in Nantucket, a must for any Limerick competition. Minus 2.5 for "said with glee." That sounds suspiciously like the one at http://limericks.chickenwingsoftware.com/status/24/
How well does it fit the category? 6.0
Score: 6.0
Review by Christine Perfetti at 2008-05-07 15:40:08
I like it. I'm giving extra points for the "said with glee" line. It's the best line *ever*.
How well does it fit the category? 8.0
Score: 8.0
Review by Nick Jaegers at 2008-07-21 18:17:06
Very nice. The only fault I can find in it is that you devote two lines to say that he was saying things. Other than that, nice work.
How well does it fit the category? 10.0
Score: 8.0