by Nick Jaegers on 2008-06-19 22:49:47
The sun's rays shine on me bright, and I cannot help but wait for the night, It's given me quite a burn, So perhaps next time I'll learn, To put on sun screen more than slight.
- Score: 9.00
These people call this Limerick a favorite:
Review by Eddie Sullivan at 2008-06-20 09:59:18
Hmm, I like it. I think this is the first one to put a *negative* twist on the summer, so points for originality. And plus one for making the title rhyme.
How well does it fit the category? 8.0
Score: 10.0
Review by happy face at 2009-04-06 13:55:59
nice work
How well does it fit the category? 8.0
Score: 8.0
Reply by happy face at 2009-04-06 13:57:49
its is a 10