by Nick Jaegers on 2008-06-20 19:12:04
Isaac and I went in the lake for a dip, This was during our camping trip, We then spied a deer, Its eyes, wide with fear, Now over the fire, it, we flip.
- Score: 6.67
Review by Isaac Campbell at 2008-06-21 21:02:27
YAY!
How well does it fit the category? 10.0
Score: 10.0
Review by John Sullivan at 2008-07-21 20:07:59
I am not sure I like the homoerotic undertones. It flows decently, but stumbles a little on the beer test.
How well does it fit the category? 4.0
Score: 4.0
Review by Tim Chance at 2008-12-07 14:52:21
There are some Brokeback influences for sure but that's not a bad thing. Jumps nicely to the last line
How well does it fit the category? 4.0
Score: 6.0